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WHAT THE GUIDANCE SAYS

Say it first.
Say it plainly.

Most readers skim, and skimmers miss things.

The team that writes GOV.UK has public rules for copy anyone can use: short sentences, everyday words, clear titles and the most important thing at the top.

CUT IT then cut it again

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THE SHORT ANSWER

Write for people
in a hurry.

Three rules from the GOV.UK writing guidance.
They work for any website, letter or email.

STRUCTURE

Put the answer first

Readers often scan in an F-shaped pattern: across the top, down the left. GOV.UK says put the most important information first and taper to detail.

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SENTENCES

Split anything over 25 words

GOV.UK asks writers to split sentences over 25 words and keep paragraphs to no more than five sentences.

Check a habit

WORDS

Buy, not purchase

Use the words people use: buy, help, about rather than purchase, assist, approximately. Explain specialist terms the first time.

How to edit
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FOUR EDITS TO TRY

Edit like
a content designer.

Take any page, email or letter you have written and make these four passes. Each one comes from the GOV.UK writing guidelines.

  1. Move the answer up

    Put the most important point in the first lines and let the detail follow, like an upside-down pyramid.

  2. Count to 25

    Find every sentence over 25 words and split it. Keep paragraphs to five sentences or fewer.

  3. Swap formal words

    Change purchase to buy, assist to help and approximately to about. Explain any specialist term the first time.

  4. Write useful headings

    Make headings descriptive and active, and avoid vague ones such as Introduction. Do not use questions as headings.

TWO NUMBERS WORTH KNOWING

People skim,
and many find reading hard.

One figure on how much of a page gets read,
one on adult literacy in England.

20–28%

Share of words read on an average visit

In a 2008 analysis of real browsing data, users had time to read at most 28 percent of the words on a page during an average visit, and about 20 percent was more likely.

WEB READING · NIELSEN NORMAN GROUP

1 in 6

Adults in England with very poor literacy

That is 18 percent of adults aged 16 to 65, or 6.6 million people, based on the Survey of Adult Skills 2023. They can read short, simple texts on familiar topics.

ADULT LITERACY · NATIONAL LITERACY TRUST

Plain English is not only for weaker readers. GOV.UK cites a study of legal language in which 80 percent of people preferred clear English, with the preference growing as issues became more complex.

A QUICK COPY CHECK

What is slowing
your reader down?

Pick a common writing habit to see what the GOV.UK guidance suggests instead. The bar shows how firmly the guidance sets a rule on it.

Copy check

Choose a habit
A 40-word sentenceSplit it

The guidance says to split sentences that are over 25 words long. Two short sentences are easier to follow than one long one.

A paragraph of eight sentencesBreak it up

Keep paragraphs to no more than five sentences. Short chunks of text are easier to scan.

An 80-character page titleTrim to 65

Titles should be 65 characters or fewer, including spaces. Google cuts longer titles off at around 65 characters, and they are harder to understand.

It is required that forms are sentMake it active

Prefer the active voice: it is more direct and keeps sentences short. The passive can still work when the outcome matters more than who acts.

Purchase, assist, approximatelySwap the word

Write buy, help and about instead. Words ending in -ion and -ment also tend to make sentences longer and harder.

Source: GOV.UK publishing guidance, Use clear language, Create a clear structure for your content, and Write clear titles.

Based on the GOV.UK writing guidelines for publishers. Use it as a style guide, not a set of laws.

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SPECIALISTS TOO

Experts like
plain English.

It is tempting to think plain writing is only for beginners. The GOV.UK guidance says users with higher literacy and specialist knowledge also prefer it, because it lets them understand information faster.

Specialist terms are still allowed, but should be explained the first time they appear. The guidance gives the legal term bona vacantia as an example, and suggests checking common search terms to find the words people really use.

Questions

Questions people ask

How long should a sentence be?

The GOV.UK writing guidance says to split sentences that are over 25 words long, and to keep paragraphs to no more than five sentences.

How much of a web page do people read?

A 2008 Nielsen Norman Group analysis found users had time to read at most 28 percent of the words during an average visit, and about 20 percent was more likely.

How long should a page title be?

GOV.UK says 65 characters or fewer, including spaces, because Google cuts off longer titles at around 65 characters and longer titles are harder to understand.

Is the passive voice always wrong?

No. GOV.UK prefers the active voice because it is more direct and keeps sentences short, but says the passive can work when the outcome matters more than who does it.

Who struggles with written information?

The National Literacy Trust says 1 in 6 adults aged 16 to 65 in England, about 6.6 million people, have very poor literacy skills. Some readers also have English as a second language.

Sources

  1. GOV.UK publishing guidance: Use clear language
  2. GOV.UK publishing guidance: Create a clear structure for your content
  3. GOV.UK publishing guidance: Write clear titles
  4. Nielsen Norman Group: How little do users read? (2008)
  5. National Literacy Trust: Adult literacy

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